Bryce Mahoney
It's too short for me to comment anything meaningful, but enough to feel the character pain.
That’s one of the shortest chapters — promise!
Can’t wait for the next Chapter, my friend!
A good, brutal beginning. Hehe. I could definitely feel his insides all beaten up and twisted around and now we learn, that was just the icing on the cake. Great opening, J.A.
It's too short for me to comment anything meaningful, but enough to feel the character pain.
That’s one of the shortest chapters — promise!
Can’t wait for the next Chapter, my friend!
A good, brutal beginning. Hehe. I could definitely feel his insides all beaten up and twisted around and now we learn, that was just the icing on the cake. Great opening, J.A.